假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Mr．Hill was a chicken farmer whose had hundreds of chickens．He sold eggs and got quite a lot of money，so the house he lived in was hot and uncomfortable．He found his hen laid hardly any eggs in summer，and then he decided to put his air conditioner（空调） into his chicken house so that his hens could lay well all through year．The boss of the air conditioning company came to see her one day．When he saw Mr．Hill's house，he thought that he might be able to persuading him to buy for an air conditioner．"Your wife would be more happier and more comfortable then．"he said to Mr．Hill．But Mr．Hill was not interesting．"My wife didn't lay eggs．"Mr．Hill said．

分析本文讲述的是一则笑话；养鸡场的场主Mr．Hill养了许多鸡，靠卖鸡蛋也赚了不少的钱，但他住的房子却又热又不舒服；因为他发现鸡在夏天几乎不下蛋，于是就把他用的空调按在了鸡舍里；空调公司的老板发现Mr．Hill住的房子里没有空调，便想劝他给自己的妻子买一台空调，Mr．Hill却不乐意地说："我妻子又不下蛋．"

解答 Mr．Hill was a chicken farmer whose had hundreds of chickens．He
sold eggs and got quite a lot of money，so the house he lived in was
hot and uncomfortable．He found his hen laid hardly any eggs in summer，
and then he decided to put his air conditioner（空调） into his chicken house
so that his hens could lay well all through∧year．The boss of the air conditioning
company came to see herone day．When he saw Mr．Hill's house，he thought
that he might be able to persuading him to buyfor an air conditioner．"Your wife
would bemore happier and more comfortable then．"he said to Mr．Hill．But Mr．
Hill was notinteresting．"My wifedidn'tlay eggs．"Mr．Hill said．
详解：
1．whose改为who    考查关系代词     本句为定语从句；关系代词whose通常在该从句中作定语；而由于此处的先行词a chicken farmer （指人），在从句中作的是主语，故用关系代词who．
2．so改为but 考查句意理解以及连词   本句的意思是：他卖鸡蛋，并且赚了不少钱，但他住的房子却又热又不舒服；此处表示转折，并非因果关系；故用but．
3．hen改为hens   考查名词的单复数    根据上文提到：养鸡场的场主Mr．Hill有成千上百只鸡，卖鸡蛋，赚了许多钱，可知此处指的应是许多母鸡；故用复数名词hens．
4．year前加the    考查固定短语     all through the year意为：全年；故在year前加the．
5．her改为him    考查人称代词的一致性   此处在句中作宾语，根据下文空调公司的老板劝Mr．Hill 给自己的妻子买空调可知；这里指的应是Mr．Hill；故用him．
6．persuading改为persuade    考查动词的形式    此处用在固定短语be able to之后，应使用动词原形；故用persuade．
7．去掉an之后的for    考查及物动词   由于buy是及物动词，其后跟宾语时，不能加介词；故去掉an之后的for．
8．去掉be之后的more或将more改为much    考查形容词的比较级/副词     由于比较级（more）不能用来修饰比较级（happier），但副词much可以用来修饰比较级；故去掉be之后的more或用much．
9．interesting改为interested   考查过去分词    此处在句中作表语，说明主语Mr．Hill （指人）的情况；故用interested．
10．didn't改为doesn't    考查时态   此处用在直接引语中，说明的是Mr．Hill 的妻子当时的情况，应使用一般现在时；故用doesn't．

点评短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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