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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

It was a Sunday afternoon. I am playing in the park with my friend when I saw an old man lying on the ground. I tried to help him standing up, and he couldn’t move and seemed in pain. Not knowing what to do, I asked my friend call an ambulance. Soon the ambulance arrived at. We helped carry the old man into the ambulance. The doctor praised us for that we did, which made us very happily.

In my opinion, every one of them should have a sense of responsibilities and a caring heart. Whenever we see someone in need of help, we should give them the hand immediately.

Answer 1

【答案】1.am → was

2.help him standing→stand

3.and → but

4.call前加to

5.去掉at

6.that→what

7.happily→happy

8.them →us;

9.responsibilities→responsibility

10.the→a

【解析】发生在过去的事情，所以使用一般过去时。

help sb do sth. 是固定用法，表示“帮助某人做某事”。

句意：我试图帮助他站起来，但是他不能移动，并且看起来很疼。表示转折关系，所以and → but。

Ask sb. to do sth. 是固定用法，意思是让某人做某事。

句意：不久，救护车来了，所以去掉at。

这里含有一个宾语从句，且引导词在从句中作宾语，所以that→what 。

make + sb. / sth. + adj. 意为“使某人或某物处于某种状态”，所以.happily→happy。

句意：我们中的每一个人都应该有一种责任感，所以them →us。

A sense of responsibility是固定用法，意思是责任感.

Give sb a hand是固定用法，意思是帮某人一把。