Question

10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen．May I have your attention，please？
I have something important to tell you．Our plan to visit the countryside has to put off till tomorrow because the rain．Now I will introduce their plan for today．we would go to visit a middle school by bus on this morning．A school has a history of 85 years．Then we'll go to an exhibition of some new invention．I think it will be interested．The bus will wait at the gate of the hotel．We'll set out at 8：30．Taking everything necessary with you and please get on the bus on time．You are welcome to ask me unless you still have any questions．Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 女士们先生们，我有一些重要的事情告诉你，今天去乡下参观的事情由于下雨将被推迟到明天，今天我们将乘坐公共汽车去参观一所学校，然后去看一个新发明展．早晨8点半出发，请带好东西按时乘车．欢迎有问题随时向我咨询．

解答 Good morning，ladies and gentlemen．May I have your attention，please？
I have something important to tell you．Our plan to visit the countryside has to∧put off till tomorrow because∧the rain．Now I will introduce their plan for today．we would go to visit a middle school by bus on this morning．A school has a history of 85 years．Then we'll go to an exhibition of some new invention．I think it will be interested．The bus will wait at the gate of the hotel．We'll set out at 8：30．Taking everything necessary with you and please get on the bus on time．You are welcome to ask me unless you still have any questions．Thank you for listening．
详解：
1．put前面加be；考查被动语态，Our plan与动词短语put off 应该是被动关系，故加上be构成被动语态．
2．because后面加of；考查介词，because引导原因状语从句，后面是名词the rain，所以要加上介词of．
3．their改为our；考查形容词性物主代词，分析句意应为"现在我介绍一下我们今天的计划"，所以要把their改为our．
4．去掉on；考查习惯用法，在英语中，如果day，month，year，morning等表示时间的名词前面有last，next，this，that，some，every等词修饰时，前面不加任何介词，故把on去掉．
5．A改为The；考查冠词，结合语境这里要用定冠词the表示特指，特指上文提到的那个学校．
6．invention改为inventions；考查名词的复数，invention是可数名词，前面有some修饰，故用复数形式．
8．interested改为interesting；考查分词作形容词，现在分词作形容词修饰物，过去分词作形容词修饰人，所有这里要用interesting修饰it．
9．out改为off；考查固定短语，set off是固定搭配，意为"出发，动身"．
10．unless改为if；考查条件状语从句，分析句意应为"如果你有问题…"，所以这里用if引导一个条件状语从句，unless意为"除非"．

点评 短文改错考查涉及面广，涉及动词考查的有时态、语态、非谓语动词形式、词汇等，另外还涉及到句型结构、行文逻辑、固定搭配等，这就要求考生要在平时注意词汇以及句型和语法结构的掌握．