Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你要完成一项关于中美学生寒假生活的调查，请给你的美国笔友Peter写一封信，交流相关信息。要点如下：

1.写信的原因；

2.介绍中国学生的寒假生活：时长约20天；过春节等

3.询问美国学生的寒假生活。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】DearPeter，

How is everything？I'm doing a project on how America and Chinese students spend their winter holidays. In China, the winter vacation is usually about twenty days long. It falls during the Chinese New Year, so most students take part in different Spring Festival activities, such as visiting family, eating lots of foods, and most importantly, getting lucky money! During the holiday many students will also go travelling with their parents. Unfortunately, they can't travel for long because Chinese students always have a lot of homework to do during this break. Many must even attend special holiday classes.

What about in the USA？How do the students spend the winter holidays there？I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给笔友Peter写信，介绍中国学生的寒假生活，并询问美国学生的寒假生活，以收集素材完成一项关于美国学生寒假生活的调查。

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主

结构：总分总

要求：

1.写信的原因；

2.介绍中国学生的寒假生活：时长约20天；过春节等

3.询问美国学生的寒假生活。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

spend/ take part in/ travel/ attend/ look forward to/ fall on/ lucky money/ accompany

第三步：连词成句

1. How is everything？

2. I'm doing a project on how America and Chinese students spend their winter holidays.

3. In China, the winter vacation is usually about twenty days long.

4.It falls during the Chinese New Year, so most students take part in different Spring Festival activities, such as visiting family, eating lots of foods, and most importantly, getting lucky money!

5. During the holiday many students will also go travelling with their parents.

6. Unfortunately, they can't travel for long because Chinese students always have a lot of homework to do during this break.

7. Many must even attend special holiday classes.

8. What about in the USA？

9. How do the students spend the winter holidays there？

10. I'm looking forward to your reply.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）