Question

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

An old man went to live with his son, daughter-in-law, and four-year-old grandson. The family ate together at the table, but his shaky hands and failing sight made eating difficult. Peas rolled off his spoon onto the floor. When he grasped the glass, milk spilled on the tablecloth. The son and daughter-in-law became angry with the mess. So they set a small table in the corner. There Grandfather ate alone while they enjoyed dinner.

Since Grandfather had broken a dish or two, his food was served in a wooden bowl. Still, the only words the couple had for him were sharp when he dropped a fork or spilled food. The grandson watched silently. One evening, the father noticed the son playing with wood scraps and asked the child sweetly, “What are you making?” The boy responded, “Oh, I am making a bowl for you and mum to eat your food in when I grow up.”

The words struck the parents so hard that they were speechless. Then tears started to stream down their cheeks. The son took gently Grandfather back to their table. From then on, he ate every meal with them. Neither of them seemed to care any longer when a fork was dropped, milk spilled, or the tablecloth soiled.

[写作内容]

1. 以约30个词概括故事的主要情节；

2. 以约120个词就“关爱老人”这个主题发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：

(1)结合你的实际生活，谈谈在关爱老人方面，你平时是怎样做的。

(2)就老年人应该得到的待遇发表你的看法并阐明理由。

［写作要求］

1. 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

［评分标准］

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

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Answer 1

A grandfather was treated badly by his son and daughter-in-law. And later the couple’s attitudes was changed after they saw their son was preparing a bowl for them. (33 words)

As for me, I always showed my respect and love to the old. When I was young, I brought my questions to them for help often, which made them busy but happy. I formed a habit to take a walk with them after dinner, talking about my study, ambitions and their rich experience.

In my opinion, we should treat the old people just like what we want to be treated when we are old. Honor and respect should be given to them by their relatives and the whole society, because they are in poor health, bad mental conditions, and can’t achieve everything by themselves. Besides, they’ve already contributed a lot to their family and society and they deserve the love from us all. (122 words )

【解析】

试题分析：阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。写作内容：1. 以约30个词概括故事的主要情节；2. 以约120个词就“关爱老人”这个主题发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：(1)结合你的实际生活，谈谈在关爱老人方面，你平时是怎样做的。(2)就老年人应该得到的待遇发表你的看法并阐明理由。要把所提示的点写全，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。要求概括准确，语言规范，内容合适篇章连贯。写作要求：1. 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。词数要按要求，既不能太多也不能太少。

【亮点说明】A grandfather was treated badly by his son and daughter-in-law.文章第一句话就使用了一般过去时态的被动语态；the couple’s attitudes was changed after they saw their son was preparing a bowl for them.句中使用了含时间状语从句的复合句；As for me, I always showed my respect and love to the old. As for的运用很巧妙；When I was young, I brought my questions to them for help often, which made them busy but happy.这是一个含时间状语从句的复合句同时包含了一个which引导的非限制性定语从句；I formed a habit to take a walk with them after dinner, talking about my study, ambitions and their rich experience.现在分词作伴随状语，运用的恰到好处；In my opinion, we should treat the old people just like what we want to be treated when we are old.句子虽然不太长但含有一个时间状语从句和一个宾语从句；Honor and respect should be given to them by their relatives and the whole society, because they are in poor health, bad mental conditions, and can’t achieve everything by themselves.这是一个含原因状语从句的复合句，主句中包含了情态动词的被动语态，从句中使用了并列谓语。

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