Question

【题目】你校英文报正在策划一期以环保为主题的专刊。假如你是该报编辑李明，请给大家写一封倡议书，要点如下：1.步行或骑车上学；2.及时关水龙头、关灯；3.不乱扔垃圾。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear students,

I’m writing this letter to call on everybody to participate in protecting the environment.Here are my suggestions.

Walking or riding a bike is a green means of going to school.Upon leaving a classroom,make sure the lights are switched off.After washing your hands,do remember to turn off the tap.Moreover,try to put the garbage in the right place for recycling.

I hope everyone can start with little things,which will eventually make a difference.

Li Ming

【解析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：
1.根据题干明确自己的写作目的是以环保为主题对大家发出倡议。2.要注意倡议书的格式和语气，明确写作的对象，应该言辞诚恳，起到号召大家的作用。
3.要点要齐全。但是不能对要点进行简单的罗列，可以加一些细节上的描写，同时使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。
4.文章的结构要合理安排，让人一目了然。

【范文亮点】

1.文章以“I’m writing this letter to call on everybody to participate in protecting the environment”开头，直奔主题，开门见山，引出本文的主题与目的；多出祈使句的运用也很符合倡议书的要求，例如“do remember to turn off the tap”、“try to put the garbage in the right place for recycling”等，最后总结，“I hope everyone can start with little things,which will eventually make a difference.”深化了文章的主题。

2.文章运用了“call on号召”“ a green means of一种很好的做某事的方式”“ make sure确保”“ make a difference”等高分词组，很好的运用了连接词“Moreover”等过渡自然。