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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As the saying goes, chance favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience.

I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.

From this, I am firmly convincing that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared.

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【解析】第一处：考察时态，由于这句话是谚语，谚语一般采用一般现在时，故要将favored改为favors.

第二处：考察名词单复数，one of the/形容词性物主代词后应该加可数名词复数，故要把experience后加s,变为experiences.

第三处：考察冠词，可数名词单数前要加冠词，且此处表示泛指，故要在member前加上冠词a.

第四处：考察非谓语动词，此句中出现了两个谓语动词，分别是decided和play, 所以需要把第二个动词变换成非谓语动词，且需跟在介词up之后，（介词后面的动词需用-ing形式），故要将play改为playing.

第五处：考察逻辑连词，but前的句意是“我最好的朋友不让我这么做”，but后的句意是“是我的懒惰还有准备不足才导致了失败”，前后并没有转折的意思，而是承接的关系，故要将but改为and.

第六处：考察强调句，it is/was…that…,故要将which改为that..

第七处：考察介词，介词on后应该接名词才可以构成状语，且every day本身相当于副词，可以单独 作状语，故要把on去掉.

第八处：考察副词，副词修饰形容词，形容词修饰名词，而形容词full后面不是名词，而是形容词，故要用副词来修饰，故要将full改为fully.

第九处：考察形容词，convincing让人确信的，主语是物，convinced感到确信的，主语是人，而此处主语是I,故要将convincing改为convinced.

第十处：考察代词一致，convince后引导的是一个完整的从句，从句的主语是we,故要将I改为we.