Question

【题目】暑假国外旅行时同团的一个小女孩于上午10点左右在机场咖啡厅附近走失，请你替她焦急的父母写一份广播稿通知找人，要点如下：女孩名叫玲玲，4岁，身高110cm左右，长发大眼，身穿红裙白鞋。如发现任何线索请将小孩送到机场广播站或拨打电话677-852-4523。对提供帮助的人表示感谢。

注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。

Answer 1

【答案】

Announcement

Ladies and Gentlemen,

Attention, please! Here is something urgent!

A four-year-old Chinese girl named Lingling is missing. She is about 110cm tall with long straight black hair as well as a pair of big eyes. She is wearing a red dress and white shoes. She was last seen at ten o’clock nearby the cafe at the airport. Lingling’s parents are very anxious as she can only speak Chinese Putonghua.

If any of you see her or get any clue about her, please take her to the broadcasting station of the airport or call at 677-852-4523.

We’d show our sincere gratitude to anyone who offers related information or who helps find the girl.

Thanks for your attention!

【解析】

试题分析：本文是篇广播稿，内容提示较简洁，只是框架，学生容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，同时要注意通知的格式。通知的语言要尽量简洁，突出主题，描述要客观一点，不要加入过多的个人感情。本篇通知主要是根据提供的要点来写，适当组织语言使通知的条理清晰。

【亮点说明】文章要点齐全，详细的描述了女孩的体貌特征，并且提供了联系电话，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，同时注意到了通知的正确格式。本文运用了一些比较正式的通知的词汇和短语，如Attention，urgent，anxious，get any clue about，show our sincere gratitude to，related information。开头的两句Attention, please! Here is something urgent!感叹句体现了家长焦急的心理和事情的紧急程度，结尾Thanks for your attention!的感谢符合通知的语气。