Question

【题目】假定你是学生王明。有一批埃及中学生来到北京。学校派你给他们当导游，领他们参观长城。参观前，由你介绍长城。内容包括以下几点：

1．向客人作自我介绍,对他们参观长城表示欢迎；

2．长城同金字塔(pyramid)一样，是世界奇观之一。长城有两千多年的历史，长6000多公里，高6—7米，宽4—5米，现在是旅游胜地；

3．长城和金字塔一样，都是几千年前劳动人民修建的。中埃两国人民都是世界上伟大的人民。我们为此而自豪。

埃及 Egypt

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That’s all．Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】

May I have your attention, please?

I’m Wang Ming. Welcome to China. It’s my great honor to be your guide when you visit the Great Wall. The Great Wall of China, like the pyramids in Egypt, is one of the wonders of the world. It has a history of more than 2000 years. It is over 6,000 kilometers long, 6—7 meters high and 4—5 meters wide. Now it’s a place of great interest. Like Pyramids, the Great Wall was built by working people thousands of years ago. The Chinese people and the Egyptian people are both great people in the world, and we are proud of this.

Seeing is believing. I hope you can have a good time on the Great Wall.

Thank you for your attention！

【解析】

试题分析：本文是要求作为导游向一批埃及中学生介绍长城。文章给出了汉语提示。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

亮点说明：

1.使用高级句型：被动语态Like Pyramids, the Great Wall was built by working people thousands of years ago.和金字塔一样，长城几千年前很多工人们建造的。谚语Seeing is believing眼见为实。2.使用了重要短语：one of the wonders奇观之一 a place of great interest名胜；are proud of以…而自豪；have a good time 玩得开心。