Question

假如有一批澳大利亚中学生在京旅游，住在北京饭店，请用英语为他们拟一个参观颐和园的口头通知, 内容要点如下:
1．参观时间: 10月15日，星期三
2．颐和园简介: 它是中国最大的保存最完好的皇家(royal)园林, 风景优美, 甚是迷人, 有山有水, 有皇家建筑和画廊。
3．活动安排: 上午自由参观, 中午在快餐馆吃午饭, 下午5:30返回宾馆。
4．集合时间: 星期三早上6:10, 汽车6:30开, 行驶45分钟。
5．集合地点: 宾馆大门口。
要求: 不要逐条翻译, 词数100词左右 。注意通知格式。
Boys and girls,
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Answer 1

Boys and girls,
May I have your attention? I have an announcement to make.
We will visit the summer Palace on Wednesday, October 15. The Summer Palace is the largest well-kept royal park in China. In the park there is water and man-piled hills. There are some royal buildings and a gallery, too. I am sure you will be struck by its beautiful scenery. In the morning we will be free to visit the different places of the Palace and then we will have lunch in the fast-food restaurant. We will get back to the hotel at half five. Please gather at the hotel gate at 6:10 on Wednesday morning. The buses will start at 6:30. It will take us about 45 minutes to get there. Please be on time. Thank you.

解析试题分析：这篇作文是口头通知，要点是以提纲形式出现的，包括简介，时间地点和安排，要点要覆盖全，为了文章连贯也可以适当增加细节。还有就是时态的问题，应该是一般将来时，还有通知中有地点，时间，注意英语的表达法，因为是口头通知，可以用写简洁的句子，不要太复杂，要点交代清楚就行。
考点：考查应用文的写作
点评：口头通知是常见的写作形式，注意写作格式，正文的写作套路，还有时态，句子的简洁。