Question

【题目】你是高三学生李华，与美国的Bob是网友。请你给Bob写封信，介绍自己希望在高考之后的假期实现的三个愿望，并询问Bob的愿望和建议。

1. 实现大学梦，考上自己理想的大学；

2. 实现志愿者梦，到孤儿院做义工；

3. 实现旅游梦，体验蒙古草原上的生活。

注意：1. 词数120左右；

2. 不要逐句翻译，可适当增加情节。

3. 参考词汇：孤儿院：orphanage；蒙古草原：Mongolia grassland

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Bob,

I haven’t written to you for a long time. This time I’d like to share with you the wishes I want to realize in the holiday after the entrance examination.

To begin with, as a student, I have been working hard in senior high school for three years, and I do hope I will succeed in being admitted into my ideal university to further my education. Also, I can spare more time to help children in the orphanage, which is helpful for my character building. Finally, the holiday provides me with a great opportunity to realize my dream to travel. Maybe experiencing life on the Mongolia grassland with people there will be a good choice to broaden my vision. Do you have some wishes to share with me and some advice for me?

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求考生以李华的身份给美国网友Bob写信，介绍自己希望在高考之后的假期实现的三个愿望并询问Bob的愿望和建议。所以文章使用第一人称和一般现在时的时态。要点如下：1. 实现大学梦，考上自己理想的大学；2. 实现志愿者梦，到孤儿院做义工；3. 实现旅游梦，体验蒙古草原上的生活。建议文章分成两部分，第一部分为导入内容，第二部分具体介绍自己的愿望。在写作的时候尽量使用合适的连接词连接上下文，并尽可能地使用高级句式提升文章层次。