Question

【题目】高三学生学习任务繁重。体育课已成为难得的放松时间, 可目前你们体育课内容单一，有时甚至被占用。请你用英语写一篇短文，给校报投稿, 词数不少于80，内容应包括：

1. 目前体育课的现状

2. 你对此现象的看法

3. 提出一些合理的建议

Dear editor,

As the college entrance examination is drawing near,________________________________

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

As the college entrance examination is drawing near. We senior high school students are occupied with busy work. To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects.

Not only can PE class build our body but also can shape our personality. It serves to develop our awareness of cooperation and spirit of competition. Therefore, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by other lessons. Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. After all, not everybody thinks running, jumping or ball games appealing.

I hope PE class can not only enrich our school life but also enable everyone to find his or her own pleasure in it.

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，高三学生学习任务繁重。体育课已成为难得的放松时间, 可目前你们体育课内容单一，有时甚至被占用。请你用英语写一篇短文，给校报投稿, 词数不少于80，内容应包括：

1. 目前体育课的现状2. 你对此现象的看法3. 提出一些合理的建议。语言结构正确，行文规范。短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称和第三人称。要求写约80个词，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：are occupied with 、To a certain extent 、Not only引导的倒装句、which 和that引导的同位语从句、where引导的定语从句等都很不错。