Question

根据下面提示，写一篇有关南京的短文。字数：110左右

1.南京，古称金陵，位于中国东部，长江横贯东西。

2.占地面积6597平方公里(square kilometers)，总人口600多万。

3．南京是一座有着悠久历史的文化名城，曾是六朝古都，有很多文化遗迹。

4．在中国发展史上占有重要的地位。

5．第十届全国运动会于今年10月在南京奥体中心成功举办。这是南京人的骄傲。有9900多名来自全国各地的运动员参加了40多个项目的比赛。奥体中心成为南京标志性建筑之一。

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Answer 1

Possible sersion:

Nanjing, also called Jinling in ancient times(whose ancient name is Jinling), lies/is in the east of China. The Changjiang River flows through it from west to east. It has/covers an area of 6597 square kilometers with a total population of over 6 million.

Nanjing is a famous city with a long history and rich culture. It was once the capital of six dynasties. Therefore, it has many cultural relics. In a word, Nanjing has played a very important role/part in the development of China.

The Tenth National Games were held successfully in Nanjing Olympic Stadium this October, which is the pride of Nanjingers(the people in Nanjing). More than 9900 athletes from all parts of the country competed in over 40 events. And the Olympic Stadium has become one of the great symbolic buildings in Nanjing.

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试题分析：

题目要求根据中文提示并结合自身知识写一篇关于南京的短文。要求110字左右。不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：运用了插入语also called Jinling in ancient times…定语从句which is the pride of Nanjingers……with结构It has/covers an area of 6597 square kilometers with a total population of over 6 million。这些句子的使用提升了文章的档次，同时也显示较高的语法知识点使用能力；范文中使用Therefore, In a word, this October ，And加了文章的连贯性，使文章上下联系紧密；范文中运用了大量的高级词汇如covers。“ It has/covers an area of 6597 square kilometers with a total population of over 6 million.在南京这片6597平方公里的土地上居住着6百多万人。”cultural relics文化遗产。整体拉高了作文层次。范文中使用了一些固定短语: lies in， played a very important role/part in，be pride of，one of the great…等丰富了文章的内容，使文章更加充实完整。

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