Question

短文改错 （共10处错误，每改对1处1分，共10分）
Once there was boy. His mother was very fat but talked too much to him. He didn’t want his teachers and classmate to see her. Every time the parents’ meeting was held, he would ask a beautiful lady to attend it instead her. In return, she paid her 50 yuan each time. One day, he was serious ill and lost consciousness. So he sent to hospital by his teacher. Three days late he came back to life and got to know his mother had been looking after him all the time. He was so thankful that he cried and had told his mother how sorry he was for that he had done.

Answer 1

小题1:boy 前加a
小题2:but改为and;
小题3:classmate改为 classmates
小题4:instead 后加 of
小题5: she 改为 he
小题6:serious 改为 seriously
小题7: sent 前加 was
小题8:late 改为 later
小题9:去掉told 前 had
小题10:for后 that 改为 what

试题分析：
小题1:boy 是可数名词，前加a，句意：从前有个男孩
小题2:他妈妈很胖和他说话太多，是并列关系，不是转折关系：but改为and;
小题3:考查名词：teachers是复数，classmate也应该改为 classmates
小题4:instead是副词，要是接宾语 后加 of
小题5:根据句意应该是男孩每次付给他50块钱，she 改为 he
小题6:修饰形容词ill应该是副词seriously
小题7:句意：他被老师送到医院，用过去时的被动：sent 前加 was
小题8:表示“几天后”用a few days later
小题9:和cried并列用过去时told
小题10:for后面的宾语从句，从句中缺少宾语： that 改为 what
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。