Question

18．假如你是中学生李华．在一位叫WolfDad 的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容．请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复．
I'm the father of a sixteen-year-old boy．I have a rule for my son：be among the top 3 students or get punished in one way or another．He has been doing very well in school，but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on him．Am I wrong？
写作要点：
1．表明自己的看法；
2．陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；
3．提出至少两条建议；
4．词数120 左右．
Hi，WolfDad，
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                                                           Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一封回信，也是一篇半开放性的作文．题材比较新颖，对考生的要求也比较高，要求考生根据前一封信筛选要点，学习成绩不是衡量学生的唯一标准，应该让学生自由发展这应该是回信的要点所在．在写作时要注意使用较高级的词汇如mentally and physically，也应该使用一些好的关联词如Furthermore等．
重点短语和句型：
be ignored 被忽视
turn out 结果是，事实证明是
by no means 绝不是
mentally and physically 身心
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China．
句中what连接主语从句．
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission，development in wisdom，emotion，health，and life attitude should never be ignored．
句中although连接让步状语从句．
The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities．
句中that连接表语从句．

解答 Hi，WolfDad，
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China．（高分句型一）My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so．（表达观点）
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission，development in wisdom，emotion，health，and life attitude should never be ignored．（高分句型二）There are many examples around us．Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected．The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities．（高分句型三）Furthermore，punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically．（陈述理由）
So I suggest that you take your friends'advice．More importantly，let him live like a lovely boy；let him have more friends and social activities；and let him make mistakes of his own as the teenagers often do．（提出建议）
Yours，
Li Hua．

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．