Question

【题目】假定你是李华，大学刚毕业。你看见某公司在China Daily上刊登了一则广告，招聘英文秘书一名，要求如下。请你根据其要求，写一封求职信。

1. 20~25周岁，身体健康，身高1.75米以上；

2.本科以上学历，有工作经验者优先；

3.具备扎实的英语基础，擅长写作。

注意: 1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear sir,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear sir,

Having learned in China Daily that you are looking for a secretary who has a good command of the English language, I’m writing to apply for this position.

My name is Li hua, twenty-two years old. I am 1.78 meters tall, strong and healthy. I’ve just graduated from the English Department of Yunnan University with a bachelor’s degree. In my spare time at university, I worked as a typist for some time. I’m also good at writing in English and two articles of mine have been published in 21st Century so far. And I passed the National English Band 6 last year.

I’m very interested in the job. If I can take the position, I’ll be thankful to you for your kindness.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封求职信，应聘英文秘书。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 20~25周岁，身体健康，身高1.75米以上；

2.本科以上学历，有工作经验者优先；

3.具备扎实的英语基础，擅长写作。

第二步：列提纲 (重点词组)

look for；look forward to；a good command of；graduate from；be good at

第三步：连词成句

Having learned in China Daily that you are looking for a secretary who has a good command of the English language, I’m writing to apply for this position.

I’ve just graduated from the English Department of Yunnan University with a bachelor’s degree.

I’m also good at writing in English and two articles of mine have been published in 21st Century so far.

I’m very interested in the job. If I can take the position, I’ll be thankful to you for your kindness.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改