Question

【题目】春天来了，万物复苏，阳光明媚。假如你是高三(1)班班长李华，请你发一份书面倡议，鼓励大家多进行户外活动，愉悦身心，调整状态，以迎接紧张的学习。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Boys and girls，

Spring has come.

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Boys and girls，

Spring has come. It brings us warm sunshine, green grass, colorful flowers as well as sweet taste of air. It is the very time to refresh us from tiredness. In order to gain the best physical and spiritual state for further study, I propose all of us go outdoors to take part in more activities, such as spring outing, jogging, mountainclimbing, cycling and so on, which can rest our body and mind. With these activities, we can enjoy the country life, away from city noise and dust. We can also feel physical and mental pleasure. Thus we are sure to be more energetic and obtain high learning efficiency. So for the benefit of ourselves, go out and jump in the fresh right now.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封书面倡议，鼓励大家多进行户外活动，愉悦身心，调整状态，以迎接紧张的学习。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 鼓励大家多进行户外活动。

2. 词数100左右。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

as well as；In order to；propose；take part in；such as；

第三步：连词成句

1. Spring has come. It brings us warm sunshine, green grass, colorful flowers as well as sweet taste of air.

2. It is the very time to refresh us from tiredness.

3. In order to gain the best physical and spiritual state for further study, I propose all of us go outdoors to take part in more activities, such as spring outing, jogging, mountainclimbing, cycling and so on, which can rest our body and mind.

4. So for the benefit of ourselves, go out and jump in the fresh right now.

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改