Question

8．There are the two simple words，"if"and"what"．These two words can be used in many sentences and questions by themselves，but if you put them together，it forms a serious question，"What if…？"
This question will bring you back to a certain time in your life when you made a choice．You may not be happy with that choice today and often think about why you did it，but you made the decision because it was the best choice at that specific moment in your life．Now，years later，you start to think about that specific choice you made．You mentally struggle with yourself and consider if you could choose again，what would you do？Would it be totally different？I truly believe if you want something very much，you can do it and achieve it，because"Where there is a will，there is a way．"You can correct the mistakes of your decisions for the past，go out and find happiness in the right decisions for your future．It is never too late to do anything in life．
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容．
2．以约120个词就"人生努力永不晚"谈一谈你的看法，内容包括：
（1）你对人生努力的理解；
（2）举一个"大器晚成"的例子；
（3）你对实例的评价或看法．
【写作要求】
1．作文中可以使用实例来支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容论述，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．

Answer 1

分析 文是读写任务型写作，在总结材料提供的信息的基础上完成写作，写作内容包括：1）你对人生努力的理解；2）举一个"大器晚成"的例子；3）你对实例的评价或看法． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称．
重点词汇：so long as （只要）；As for （只要）； overcome （克服）；give up（放弃）；all over the world（遍及世界）；persistence（坚持，毅力）；stick to （坚持，紧跟）．
高分句型：1．This passage mainly tells us it is never too late to achieve our dreams ①so long as we have the determination，②even though some wrong decisions may have been made before．
                ①so long as 相当于if，引导条件状语从句；②even though 引导一个让步状语从句．
                 2．①No matter how many difficulties we might go through，we can overcome them②if we don't give up．
                  ①No matter 意为"不管，无论"，引导让步状语从句；②if引导条件状语从句．
                 3．It was because he never gave up that he made a fortune．
                  这是"It is/was+被强调部分+that从句"的强调句型．

解答 This passage mainly tells us it is never too late to achieve our dreams so long as we have the determination，even though some wrong decisions may have been made before（高分句型一）．
 As for me，I believe in the old saying"Nothing is impossible．"No matter how many difficulties we might go through，we can overcome them if we don't give up（高分句型二）． Harland Sanders，who quitted school and worked on a farm at 14，became a cook and dishwasher later． He did not achieve anything until he retired and used his small retirement check to start a new business at the age of 65．Now Harland's business，Kentucky Fried Chicken，has expanded to all over the world．
That man，who failed in everything he did，refused to be a loser． I really appreciate Harland's courage and persistence．It was because he never gave up that he made a fortune（高分句型三）． There is no doubt that we can equally succeed if we stick to our dreams．

点评 读写任务写作是将阅读与写作有机结合起来，要求考生在读懂文章信息的基础上，按照要求有条理地写出所要表达的内容，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，提高文章的档次．