Question

【题目】假如你是李明，对今年频繁出现的严重雾霾感触很深，认为绿色生活方式对于改善空气质量十分有益。请根据下列要点写一篇短文，向校刊“英语角”栏目投稿。

注意：词数100左右；文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

简述雾霾情况	倡导绿色生活
持续一周左右 影响全国各地 造成极大不便	乘坐公交出行 节约水电纸张 ……

Greener Life, Cleaner Air

It is not easy to forget the heavy smogs that have occurred frequently this year. _______________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Greener Life, Cleaner Air

It is not easy to forget the heavy smogs that have occurred frequently this year. It lasted for about one week or more and affected many areas in China, causing much inconvenience and even harm to our life and health.

The incident warned us to take action to fight for clean air before it’s too late! And I believe a green lifestyle can make a big difference to the air quality. Firstly, it’s good to take buses or other means of public transportation rather than cars whenever possible. What’s more, be aware to save water, electricity and paper. Moreover, recycle whatever we can. Last but not least, don’t forget to influence those around you to follow!

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇话题作文，要求讨论雾霾及其解决办法，要点已给出。根据给出的要点可以确定分两段来写：第一段简述雾霾情况，第二段倡导绿色生活。写作时要注意适当添加细节以使行文连贯，注意运用高级词汇和高级句子提高文章档次。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：定语从句that have occurred frequently this year.非谓语动词causing much inconvenience。宾语从句whatever we can。文章还运用了harm to，take action，fight for，make a big difference，rather than，be aware 等词汇及Firstly, What’s more, Last but not least等连接词。