Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校于11月13日举行了冬季运动会。你的英国笔友Peter对此事很感兴趣。请你写信向他介绍此次活动，内容包括：

1. 时间、地点；

2. 参赛项目；

3. 感想。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

4. 参考词汇：百米赛跑100-meter race 跳高 high jump 跳远 long jump

Dear Peter,

How is everything going?

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

How is everything going? I'm glad to know you are interested in our sports meeting. Now I'm writing to share it with you.

The winter sports meeting was held on our school playground on November 13th. There were many events for students to choose from. For example, running, long jump, high jump and so on. I was a runner in the 100-meter race. Even though I didn't get the first place, I was very happy because many of my classmates cheered for me. In my opinion, doing sports is a healthy way for us people to keep fit. Everybody should try to work out for some time every week.

Could you tell me what your sports meeting is like? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给笔友Peter写信，给他介绍你校冬季运动会的情况。

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主

结构：总分总

要求：

1. 时间、地点

2. 参赛项目

3. 感想

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be glad to do sth./ be interested in/ share sth with sb./ get the first prize/ in one's opinion/ keep fit/ work out/ look forward to/ hear from

第三步：连词成句

1. How are you getting on recently?

2. I'm glad to know you are interested in our sports meeting.

3. Now I'm writing to share it with you.

4. The winter sports meeting was held on our school playground on November 13th.

5. There were many events for students to choose from.

6. For example, running, long jump, high jump and so on.

7. I took part in 100-meter race.

8. Even though I didn't get the first place, I was very happy because many of my classmates cheered for me.

9. In my opinion, doing sports is a good way for us to keep healthy.

10. Everybody should try to work out for some time every week.

11. Could you tell me something about your sports meeting?

12. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）