Question

假定你是红星中学高三（2）学习委员，你常看到你班有很多同学抄袭作业，针对这种现象，你将在下周的班会上组织全班同学进行讨论，并以 “My opinion on copying others' homework” 为主题作中心发言。请你用英语写一篇发言稿。

发言稿须包括以下内容要点：

1．抄袭的主要原因；

2．抄袭的危害及解决办法；

3．简要表明自己的态度。

注意：

1. 词数不少于120；

2．发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

May I have your attention, please?

My topic today is about copying others' homework. As we know, some students copy others' homework.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

May I have your attention, please?

My topic today is about copying other’s homework.

As we all know, some students copy other’s homework. On the one hand, we students have to do masses of homework both at home and at school. Sometimes we do have some problems, too hard to work out. On the other hand, lazy and uninterested in their lessons, some students copy others’ homework not only to finish the assignments but also please their teachers.

In a word, copying other’s homework is a bad habit . For one thing ,it’s against the school rules. B eing students, we should be honest and work hard. If we have difficulties, we can turn to teachers and classmates for help. For another, copying other’s homework too often, we will lose the ability that can help us to think.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语As we all know据我们所知；On the other hand,另一方面；in a word 总而言之；turn to sb for help向某人求助；lazy and uninterested in their lessons, some students copy others’ homework not only to finish the assignments but also please their teachers这个句子中lazy and uninterested做伴随状语，还运用到not only but also连接并列的谓语动词；In a word, copying other’s homework is a bad habit这个句子动名词做主语；

考点： 提纲类作文