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2．假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华．下面四幅图描述了你和父母假日去西安自助旅游的经过．请根据图片的先后顺序，给校刊"英语园地"投稿．词数不少于60．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 No tourists will miss the local food in Xi'an，nor will we．没有任何游客会错过西安当地的美食，我们也不会．
高分句型二：
We enjoyed typical local foods，which tasted nice．我们尝遍了当地的特色美食，那些美食味道好极了．
句型一 nor will we．该句是一个特殊句式，特殊句式中的部分倒装句．表否定的副词nor位于句首，句子要使用部分倒装，即将主语同谓语部分的助动词进行交换．
句型二 which tasted nice．该句是一个由which作关系代词且在从句中充当主语，替代前面先行词foods 的非限制性定语从句．此时替代物，但不能使用that，只能有which．
此外还有以下高级词汇和短语：
instead of 代替   place of interest 名胜古迹

解答 My parents and I made a tour to Xi'an during the holiday．Instead of having a travel agency arrange our accommodation，we booked the train tickets and hotel room on the Internet by ourselves．During our tour in Xi'an，we went to many places of interest，took lots of pictures，and learned about the history of Xi'an．No tourists will miss the local food in Xi'an，nor will we．（高分句型一）We enjoyed typical local foods，which tasted nice．（高分句型二）（游玩过程）After I returned，I couldn't wait to share the photos and experiences with my classmates．The trip to Xi'an has become a happy memory to me．

点评 本文是图画类写作，考生在写作前应仔细观察所给图画，再运用准确的、合适的语言结合实际将图片内容描述清楚．写作过程中切忌偏离主题，尽量做到图文搭配．