Question

【题目】某国内英语杂志举行征文大赛，要求参赛的高中学生介绍一件自己珍藏的物品（如书信、礼物、照片……）。请你用英文写一篇字数为100-120的参赛稿，内容应包括：

1. 你得到这件物品的过程

2. 这件物品对于你的意义

注意: 文中不得以任何形式透露考生和学校等真实信息。

Answer 1

【答案】

Lying in my drawer is a delicate wooden toy ship. It was a gift from my grandfather when I was young. Grandpa was fond of making things by hand and kept improving his skills. Seeing that I was tired of school, my grandpa promised that he would make me a wooden toy ship if my grades got better. My great love for toy ships made it hard for me to refuse his offer. I agreed and the following weeks witnessed Grandpa’s constant efforts to perfect his gift.

I did a good job in the final exams. Naturally Grandpa kept his word and gave me the gift, which really looked like a real ship. “With great efforts, you can achieve whatever you want”. Whenever I see the toy ship, I will think of Grandpa’s words, giving me power to struggle on.

【解析】

试题分析：某国内英语杂志举行征文大赛，要求参赛的高中学生介绍一件自己珍藏的物品（如书信、礼物、照片……）。请你用英文写一篇字数为100-120的参赛稿，内容应包括：1. 你得到这件物品的过程。2. 这件物品对于你的意义。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意: 文中不得以任何形式透露考生和学校等真实信息。注意: 文中不得以任何形式透露考生和学校等真实信息。

【亮点说明】Lying in my drawer is a delicate wooden toy ship.动名词短语作主语；It was a gift from my grandfather when I was young.句中使用了时间状语从句；Seeing that I was tired of school, my grandpa promised that he would make me a wooden toy ship if my grades got better.现在分词作状语、宾语从句和条件状语从句的使用；My great love for toy ships made it hard for me to refuse his offer. It作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式短语；Naturally Grandpa kept his word and gave me the gift, which really looked like a real ship.运用了非限制性定语从句；With great efforts, you can achieve whatever you want句中whatever引导宾语从句；Whenever I see the toy ship, I will think of Grandpa’s words, giving me power to struggle on.让步状语从句和分词作状语完美结合。