Question

【题目】阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Do you know when and where the first film was made? It was in the 1880s, more than 120 years ago, that William Friese-Green made what we now think of as a film. The fathers of modern film are thought to be the Lumiere brothers from France. The first films ever made were silent. It was not until in 1927 that the first full-length “talking film” was shown in New York.

In 1896, film was introduced to China. The first Chinese film, Conquering Jun Mountain, was made in 1905. The first film made only by Chinese was The Difficult Couple, which was made in 1913. The Chinese film industry developed quite quickly—between 1948 and 1966, more than 600 full-length films were made, most about war.

People like to enjoy themselves when they are free and so they kill time in the cinema. Besides, they can learn more about the society, like various cultures, by watching films. Finally, although films present true pictures of life, they are higher than life. Good movies usually offer people hopes and faith.

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1. 用约30个单词写出上文的概要：

2. 用约120个单词介绍一部你喜欢的电影、电影人物或演员并阐述带给你的启示。

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1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句：

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

（评分标准）

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

The passage conveys to us the history of the film industry together with the development of Chinese film. Three reasons why people have affection for films are touched on as well.

My favorite film is Forrest Gump. Forrest Gump is also the name of the hero, who had mental problems as well as physical problems. Finally, Forrest made a great many brilliant achievements in his life.

The deep impression that the film gives me is that Forrest just keeps running all the time. Forrest tells us such an important lesson that I rethink about the meaning of being smart and clever. In the film, I got the idea that kindness as well as simplicity is the cleverest wealth.

Forrest has made it possible that people who are considered as a fool can truly make a difference. There is no denying that ordinary people can lead a rich life by perseverance! (150 words)

【解析】本篇书面表达属于半开放类作文。文中要求用一两句话概括文章大意（30字），并介绍电影（人物，演员和内容），最后要写一下自己的启示。所以本文应谋篇布局分为三段。第一段概括文章大意；第二段介绍电影的有关情况；第三段写电影的启示录。

由于本文讲的是电影业的发展历程和中国电影业的发展以及人们喜爱看电影的原因，所以我们可以概括为This passage tells us not only the history of the film industry but the development of Chinese film, along with three reasons why people love seeing films.

第二段介绍电影要注意：电影名字的首字母和每个单词的首字母要大写；我们可能会用到的词或短语有character，actor, actress content(内容)，介绍时我们很容易地就会用到who/that/which引导的定语从句如：Li Lianjie, who is a leading actor in this film, acts as an hero.等；介绍电影内容时可以加上一些表示时间的连词或短语，如：first of all, to begin with, next, meanwhile(与此同时), in the end, finally等，用几句话把电影内容叙述完整。第三段写电影的启示，我们可以用from this film, I know that ...; the film encourage me to ...; the film makes me believe the old saying “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”等等。接着，用这些关键词或词组进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。最后，连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词连接，进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】范文内容完整，语言规范，文章词数适当。作者在文中使用了较多的高级表达方式。如使用it做形式宾语代替句子并且还包含有一个定语从句的Forrest has made it possible that people who are considered as a fool can truly make a difference. 再如：使用同位语从句的There is no denying that ordinary people can lead a rich life by perseverance!另外who had mental problems as well as physical problems这个非限制性定语从句使文章很生动灵活。从文章的谋篇布局上看：文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

亮点词汇和短语：convey传达，传递；affection for对…的喜爱；mental problems as well as physical problems身心问题；make a great many brilliant achievements取得卓越的成绩；perseverance不屈不挠；坚持