Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 生日降将至，他喜欢中国文化，生肖马，为此你绘制一幅国画“马”寄给他。请你写一封邮件给 Peter，内容如下：

1.表达生日祝福；

2.说明礼物含义；

3.告知快递信息。

注意：1. 词数 100 词左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

How is everything going? Knowing that your birthday is around the corner, I would like to wish you happy birthday! May you healthy and prosperous in the following year.

I have drawn a Chinese painting named Horse specially for you. As you know, Chinese people use 12 zodiacs to represent the year and we were both born in the year of horse. Viewed as an animal full of energy, horse is a symbol of strong will and perseverance. So I hope the painting will give you spur and bring you good luck when you are pursuing your dream.

Actually this painting was sent to you a week ago and it is shown that it will be delivered to you today. I sincerely hope that you will like it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给快要过生日的英国朋友Peter写一封信。

第一步：明确要求。本篇书面表达要求考生给即将过生日的朋友Peter写一封信。题目要求写作内容应包括以下三条要点：1.表达生日祝福；2.说明礼物含义；3.告知快递信息。因此，可将本篇书面表达分成三段。第一段：说明写信目的，表达生日祝福。第二段：说明礼物含义。第三段：告知快递信息。

第二步：列关键词。如：prosperous，view as，12 zodiacs，born in，a symbol of，perseverance，be delivered to等。

第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。

第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：As you know、So等。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。