Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一 个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写 出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

    2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

   My friend Linda and I have set up small organization called Delivering Smiles with my mother. Linda and I do all of the work like collect toys and picture books. Before a month of collecting these things,my mother takes us to the hospital that she works as a nurse. When we take what we had collected to the hospital,my mother brings us to differently children's rooms. We let each child pick out of what they want. We sit in each room for about ten minute,talking to and playing with each child. When I give a little of my time for children in the hospital and when I see their smiles,we feel quite happy.

Answer 1

1 .…small organization called ...   small 前加a

2. . .. like collect toys ...   collect→ collecting

3. Before a month ...     Before→After

4. . .. that she worics as ...   that where

5. . .. we had collected to...   had→have

6. . .. differently children’s rooms.   differently→different

7. . .. pick out of...    去掉 of

8. …about ten minute …    minute→ minutes

9. . .. time for children ...    for→to   

10. . .. we feel quite ...    we→I