Question

【题目】请以Thank you, My Friend!为题，写一篇不少于120词的短文。

要求：

1. 描述你与朋友之间发生的一件事。

2. 谈谈此事带给你的启示。

注意：不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

Thank you, my friend!

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Answer 1

【答案】

Thank you, my friend!

There is no doubt that there exist some unforgettable memories between everyone and his friend. I am no different. A thing done by my best friend will never fade from my memory.

One day, while playing football with my classmates, I got injured, leading to the fact that I was unable to walk. In that case, my best friend Xiao Ming offered to help me. For a whole week, he carried me on his back from the dormitory to the classroom. Besides, he looked after me in my daily life, such as buying dishes and washing clothes for me. Thanks to his care, I recovered soon.

A friend is one who always lends you a helping hand when you are in trouble. It is with their help that we can overcome the difficulty in our life. Thank you, my friend and I swear to become a person like you.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇夹叙夹议的议论文。要求在清楚的记叙某些事情后再开始描写经过这些事情所带来的感受和启示。所以，对于事件的记叙和描述力求简洁明了，不要拖沓；对于议论部分，要求观点立场明确。题目给的范文：第一段简洁明了，开门见山，开启下文；接下来第二段就开始描述自己的经历；第三段就这件经历过的事情发表自己的看法和立场。结构清晰明了，给人简洁有力之感。短语，像There is no doubt that；In that case；For a whole week；such as；swear to…等的应用，使行文更加连贯并且能提升文章的档次。