Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Ladies and gentlemen,

It’s my honor to give a speech here. After-class activities play a important part in our school life. Proper activities help enrich our lives, broaden our horizons or develop our personalities.

Mine own experience can serve as a case in point. When I was in Senior One, I become a member of our drama club, that I used to visit on weekends. Since my participation in various activities organizing by the club, I achieved a lot.

These activities bring me a lot of funs, provide me with good opportunities to develop new friendships and open a window through which I have a brand-new outlook. With so much advantages shown above, why not to join us at once?

Answer 1

【答案】

Ladies and gentlemen,

It’s my honor to give a speech here. After-class activities play important part in our school life. Proper activities help enrich our lives, broaden our horizons develop our personalities.

own experience can serve as a case in point. When I was in Senior One, I a member of our drama club, I used to visit on weekends. Since my participation in various activities by the club, I achieved a lot.

These activities bring me a lot of , provide me with good opportunities to develop new friendships and open a window through which I have a brand-new outlook. With so advantages shown above, why not join us at once?

【解析】

第一处：a→an important的发音开头是元音，故要用不定冠词an。

第二处：or→and 句意：适当的活动有助于丰富我们的生活，拓宽我们的视野，并且可以培养我们的性格。enrich our lives，broaden our horizons和develop our personalities是并列关系，故要将or改为and。

第三处：Mine→My mine是名词性物主代词，相当于＂my+名词＂。该处后面有名词experience，故要将Mine改为My。

第四处：become→became 该句的时间状语为＂When I was in Senior One＂，是过去的时间，故主句要用一般过去时态，故应将become改为became。

第五处：that→which 分析句子结构可知，＂which I used to visit on weekends＂是非限制性定语从句，修饰our drama club，引导词在从句中作visit的宾语，故要用关系代词which引导从句。that不能引导非限制性定语从句。

第六处：/span>organizing→organized＂organized by the club＂是定语从句，修饰various activities，various activities和organize之间是被动关系，故要用过去分词作定语。

第七处：I后加have 该句的时间状语为＂Since my participation in various activities＂，since引出时间状语，主句用现在完成时态，故要在I后加have。

第八处：funs→fun fun是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故要将funs改为fun。

第九处：much→many much修饰不可数名词，many修饰可数名词复数。advantages是复数名词，故要将much改为many。

第十处：去掉to why not do sth.意为＂为什么不做……呢？＂，是固定句式，故to多余，应去掉。