Question

作为即将参加高考的高三学生，学习任务重，压力大，所以有效学习显得尤为重要。请根据你的切身体会，以“How to Be an Efficient Learner?”为题，从合理安排、劳逸结合等方面谈谈你对有效学习的看法。
注意：1. 短文标题和开头句子已给出，不计入总词数;
2. 词数：120左右。
( 可能用上的词汇： agenda  n. 日程表   well-balanced  adj. 均衡发展 )    
How to Be an Efficient Learner?
Being Senior Three students, we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day.                                                      
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Answer 1

One possible version：
How to Be an Efficient Learner?
Being Senior Three students, we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day. Because of limited time, it’s important to be an efficient learner. But how can we become efficient learners?
Firstly, we should make a realistic agenda, which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover. Secondly, divide our spare time into several parts to make sure we go through all the subjects and try to be well-balanced students. Thirdly, take regular exercise to refresh our mind and energy and make sure we are healthy enough to get round our lessons. Remember: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Besides, discussing with classmates about difficult problems to find best solutions can be of help. It’s also important to read extra books to ensure you feed on new ideas from time to time.
All in all, efficiency is the key to success.

试题分析：考查半开放性作文写作。本文讨论的话题是“How to Be an Efficient Learner?”可以从时间管理，预习复习，相同学老师借力等方面着手展开叙述，提高学习的效率。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。
点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。