Question

大多数人都希望受到别人欢迎，但并非都能做到。请根据下表问卷调查结果，写一篇题为How to be popular的英文短文。

45%的人认为: 1. 改善外表，穿着得体，精神状态好     2. 经常微笑，待人友善

55%的人认为: 1. 培养对他人的体贴   2. 当个好听众   3. 不说别人的坏话

你自己的观点 (至少两点)

注意：1. 短文须包括所有要点，可适度发挥。

2. 开头已为你写好，但不计人总词数。

3. 词数：120左右。

How to be popular

Many people desire to be popular with others but not everyone can achieve this goal. What is the secret to popularity?

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:           

How to be popular

Many people desire to be popular with others but not everyone can achieve this goal. What is the secret to popularity?

45% people believe that improving one's appearance, wearing gracefully, and keeping a good state of mind are of vital importance. In the meanwhile, someone who always smiles and treats others friendly can also enhance his or her popularity.

On the other hand,55% people consider that one can make himself(herself) more popular by showing every consideration to others, being a fine audience, and not discussing unpleasant words behind people.

In my opinion, all the main points mentioned above are essential. If one pays attention to the appearance，takes good care of others with heart and soul, moreover, keeps an eye on his(her) words and deeds, he or she must be the "super star" among people.

【解析】

试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。