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【题目】离石拥挤的道路给人们带来不便，引发社会广泛热议。是否应该拥有私家车，有人赞成，有人反对。请你以Whether or not --- Owning a private car为题，用英语论述人们的观点，并给出你自己的观点。

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Whether or not --- Owning a private car

Nowadays, masses of cars are crowded on the roads in LiShi City, causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion. Different ideas vary from person to person.

Answer 1

【答案】

Whether or not --- Owning a private car

Nowadays, masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Mianyang City, causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion. Different ideas vary from person to person.

Some people claim that there are many advantages of owning a private car. It gives a much greater degree of comfort. For example, they are no longer forced to rely on public transport. And with a car they can go where they like and enjoy themselves by making trips to the country or seaside on the weekends.

However, others strongly object to owning private cars. They maintain that as more and more cars run in the street, a large volume of poisonous gas has been given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. What’s more, in fact, private cars have contributed to a serious traffic problem.

Personally, I think private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged.

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