Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

Answer 1

1.wanted后面加to

2.come改为came

3.have改为having

4.immediate改为immediately

5.on改为at

6.Neither改为none

7.was改为were

8.去掉were或者looked

9.but改为and

【答案10】a改为an

【解析】

试题分析：考查时态、伴随状语从句、介词搭配等。

1.小题1】第一段第二句He wanted teach me …want to do sth.为固定短语，意为想要干某事，故wanted后面加to

2.小题2】第一段第三句My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting 本文描述的是过去的事情，动词应用过去式，故come改为came

3.小题3】第二段第一句One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue.前句有谓语动词，而此句又无连词，后句不可能用动词原形，应用伴随状语从句，另表示的是主动语态，故要用ing形式，故have改为having

4.小题4】第二段第二句My uncles immediate jumped up ，immediate 是形容词不能修饰动词，应变为副词来修饰动词jump，故immediate改为immediately

5.小题5】第二段第二句shot their arrows on the bird ，shot…at…是固定短语，意为瞄准，本句意为他们把箭瞄准鸟，故on改为at

6.6】第二段第三句Neither of the arrows hit the target.，neither是两者中任何一个都不，文中他们不可能只射了两箭，应用none，表示三者或三者以上的都不，故Neither改为none

7.7】第二段第四句Suddenly the arrows was flying down 主语为arrows 是复数，谓语动词也应用复数形式，故was改为were

8.8】第二段第五句they were looked like rain，were looked like是指被看起来，这里只需用主动语态即可，有两种表达方式，一是直接用look like，二是将用be like短语，故去掉were或者looked

9.9】第二段最后一句We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured 前半部分说我们逃跑了，后半部分说没人受伤，两者应是并列关系，而非转折关系，故but改为and

【答案10】最后一段最后一句but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!，impressive 是元音开头的单词，应用an修饰，故a改为an

考点：考查短文改错