Question

下面是光明中学的示意图，请你根据示意图和所给的附加信息，写一篇介绍光明中学校园的短文。

1) 校园到处种有树木和花草，校园环境优美安静;

2) 校园占地24000平方米;

3) 学校拥有近百年的历史，现有学生5000人，教职工300人左右。

参考词汇：教职工 teaching staff, 平方米 square meter

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Guangming High School is in the west of the city. When you enter the school gate, ________________________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Guangming High School is in the west of the city. When you enter the school gate, you can find the teaching building on your left and the gymnasium on your right. Walking on further, you can see a round building which is the library in the middle of the campus. The building on the northwest corner serves as the dining hall and the building opposite it on the northeast corner is the students’ dormitory.

The high school has a history of nearly 100 years. There are about 5000 students studying here and a teaching staff of about 300. The campus covers an area of 24000 square meters, with bushes and flowers surrounding every building, which provides a quiet and beautiful environment for the students.

【解析】

试题分析：考查说明文。本文是介绍了光明中学具体情况，在校园的具体的建筑物的位置上要按照一定的顺序来组织，使用具体的方位名词来表示。故需要准确表达.上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。

考点：考查说明文

点评：动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。