Question

 下面四幅图片描述的是，星期一早晨李华在上学路上经历的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信息以第三人称用英语写一篇短文。

注意：①短文必须包括所有图片的主要内容，短文的内容要连贯、完整；

②短文单词数：100左右（开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数）。

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

今年辽宁卷的书面表达考的是看图作文，可以说这篇文章还是比较容易的，词汇要求不是十分高，只要学生写全要点，得分就不会太低。下面是参考范文。

    It was snowing heavily on Monday morning. Li Hua was at the bus stop, waiting for Bus No.601 to go to school. After a while, a bus came and she got on it. There were many passengers in the bus. Some were talking and some were looking out of the windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. The driver turned around and said, “Sorry. The bus has broken down. Please get off and help push the bus.” When they heard this, Li Hua and the other passengers got off the bus. They worked hard together, pushing the bus slowly forward. Soon the bus was running again. All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.

【详解】 这篇范文的成功之处：1、运用了文章结构清晰、明朗，要点全；2、充分运用各种句型、词汇表达，使文章不单调。3、能够有一些恰当的自由发挥。

【书面表达题型备考指导】今年的辽宁卷书面表达出的是一篇看图作文，属于基本的题型，在考前学生也应该是大量地练过了。但“新课标”相当注重学生的写作能力，所以2006届考生要尽量地加大自己的词汇量，并且关心身边事，同时了解评分标准和应试作文的技巧。背诵一些常用的优秀文章和好词好句，可以使书面表达变得不再困难。