Question

你所在的班级将要举办一次主题为“What Can We Do for Our School?”的英语演讲比赛。请写一篇英语演讲稿，要求从以下四方面中任选一至二个进行阐述，并举例加以说明。

1.关心他人；

2.美化校园；

3.受护学校设施；

4.营造良好的学习氛围。

注意：

1.不要在书面表达中出现所在学校的校名和本人姓名，否则本节判为零分；

2.词数：100左右；

3.参考词汇：

爱心――love and care;校园――campus; 设施――facilities; 氛围――environment

4.开头和结尾已经写好，且不记入词数。

Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.

Thank you for listening!

 

 

Answer 1

Hello，everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.

The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful. Every one of us may plant a tree in the school, or organize a thorough cleaning on the campus. We can also form a good habit of putting the rubbish in the trashcan. Never forget to turn off the light or close the door. We should not leave the tap water running or waste any materials in the laboratory class.

If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.

Thank you for listening!

【思路点拨】

1．可按照四步法写作。即：仔细审题à列出提纲à扩展成文à检查修改。

2．审题时，主要应注意如下五审：（1） 一审要求。写作前一定要认真阅读相关的写作要求；（2） 二审文体及格式，本文是一篇演讲稿，写作时要注意其格式；（3） 三审人称。（4） 四审时态、语态。（5） 五审要点。

3．写作时要用一些高级的单词，短语。句式结构要灵活多变，不要单一，还要考虑是否可以用上一两句名人名言或谚语。这样可以使你的作文锦上添花！

【亮点回放】

1．文章格式正确、结构简洁、清晰，内容详略得当，符合写作要求。文章中的时态、语态也准确无误。

2．能够恰倒好处地使用一些单词以及短语，如organize a thorough cleaning, form a good habit of , turn off等。句式结构也较丰富，有祈使句、从句、It引导的相关句子等等。

3．结尾If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.简短有力！升华了主题