Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校外教露西女士近期准备回英国度假，你班同学准备举行晚会为她送行。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封e-mail，通知她相关情况。

1、对她的辛勤教学工作表示感谢；

2、晚会本周六晚上6：30开始，预计持续一个小时；

3、地点：高三12班教室；

4、活动：一起唱英文歌，班长代表全班赠送鲜花和亲手制作的礼物。

注意：1. 字数100词左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文更连贯。

3. 开头和结尾已给出。（不计入总词数）

Dear Lucy,

We hear that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon. All the class will miss you very much during your absence!_________________________________

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Lucy

We hear that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon. All the class will miss you very much during your absence!

Firstly, I’d like to express our gratitude for your excellent teaching in our school and your care and love for our class! So we have decided to have a farewell party this Saturday for you. The party will start at 6:30 on Saturday evening in the classroom of Class 12, Grade 3 and will probably last about an hour. All of the class hope you can join us singing some English songs and have a good time together. At the end of the party, the monitor will present you some flowers and gifts, which are mostly made by ourselves.

We wish you a plain journey back home! We are also expecting you to come back to China again soon.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出。成文时要注意：1.文章主要用第一人称；2.时态：灵活变换；3.文章的内容要点要齐全：（1）对她的辛勤教学工作表示感谢；（2）晚会本周六晚上6：30开始，预计持续一个小时；（3）地点：高三12班教室；（4）活动：一起唱英文歌，班长代表全班赠送鲜花和亲手制作的礼物。4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；5.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制，100单词左右。

亮点说明：例文当中使用了过渡词firstly等，其次使用了express one’s gratitude for sth,present等短语与词汇，文章表述清楚，用词准确，句式多样，要点齐全。