Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你们学校准备在下学期每天安排一节自习课。学校英语社团就此在学 生中做了一项调查。请你根据以下调查结果用英语写一篇发言稿。

内容包括：

1. 陈述调查结果；

2. 谈谈你个人的选择及理由。

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：自习课 a period for individual study

Good morning, everyone! Recently a survey has been done in our school about whether it is necessary to set aside a period in each school day for individual study.

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Thank you very much for your attention!

Answer 1

【答案】Good morning, everyone! Recently a survey has been done in our school about whether it is necessary to set aside a period each school day for individual study.

According to the survey, more than half of the students feel it beneficial to do so while 15 percent hold an opposite view. In addition, the rest seem to care little about it.

As for me, the time for individual study helps us students in many ways. Firstly, the period will serve as an open opportunity to review what we've learnt previously. Also, we can use this period to do our homework so that we can have more time to preview the lessons. Moreover, we can turn to the teachers or classmates immediately we encounter any problems of learning. Only by using our time more efficiently can we become a better learner.

Thank you very much for your attention!

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇调查发言稿。学校准备在下学期每天安排一节自习课，学校英语社团做了一项调查：Agree55%；Don’t care30%；Disagree15%。要求发言稿1. 陈述调查结果；2. 谈谈你个人的选择及理由。写作时要求句子通顺，内容精炼，时态、语态使用正确，关联词、高级句子运用得当。注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】

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