Question

假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1. 本人简介；
2. 求助内容；
3. 约定时间；
4. 你的联系方式 （Email: lihua@1236.com; Phone: 12345678
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with notetaking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: lihua@1236. com; 12345678.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours                                                            Li Hua

试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是对学生暑假课程学习中遇到的困难，所以要用一般现在时。要求让你学习辅导中心写一封email，因此本文必须用第一人称。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的得分档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如ask for help，have no idea of等，还运用了have difficulties with固定句型和how to use the library非谓语动词结构等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：but，and 等等。