Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My family was very poor when I was child. My parents were workers but couldn’t afford to buy toysfrom me. As a result, my dolls looked a lot differently from those bought from toy stores. My dolls were home-made. The first doll I owned it was made of a glass Coca-Cola bottle. I was such excited to make a doll byitself. Soon I became a collector of empty Coca-Cola bottles because I see each bottle as a possible baby doll atthat time. People whom worked in the store selling Coca-Cola could see me pick up empty bottles almost everyday. Those home-made toys brought me a lot of happy.

Answer 1

【答案】1.invited后面加to

2.surprising改成 surprised

3.month改成 months

4.how改成 what

5.but改成 and

6.realize改成 realized

7.he改成I

8.smiled改成smiling

9.happily改成happy

10.去掉a

【解析】

试题

【1】child前加a 名词child是一个可数名词，使用a修饰。

【2】but-and 上下文存在着并列的关系，我的父母都是工人，买不起玩具给我。

【3】from-for 固定搭配buy sth for sb买东西给某人。

【4】differently-different. 前面有系动词look，后面应该使用形容词different与look构成系表结构。

【5】it去掉 本句是定语从句，在dolls后面省略了that/which，作为动词owned的宾语，可以省略。本句中的it是多余的。

【6】such-so 该词后面是形容词excited，所以使用so来修饰，such后面使用名词。

【7】itself-myself by myself自己做的；指这个doll是我自己做的。

【8】see-saw 本文是以过去时为主的时态，故本句使用saw。

【9】whom-who 本句是一个定语从句，句子缺少主语，故使用who，在句中做主语。Whom通常只坐宾语。

【10】happy-hapiness 固定短语a lot of后面要修饰名词，故使用happy的名词happiness。