Question

【题目】请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

The University of Cambridge confirmed on Monday that it had been using scores from China's national college entrance examination, or gaokao, as part of its admission criteria for Chinese students for several years.

It says in Weibo post, however, that it does not admit students only based on their test scores.

The University statement came after some Chinese media reported over the weekend that the university would start to admit Chinese students that ranked in the top 0.1 percent in the gaokao in their province, indicating that it would try to compete for talent with top universities in China.

The news immediately became one of the most viewed topics on social media, being read by 280 million users on Sina Weibo.

The gaokao is increasingly accepted by universities in Australia, the United States, Canada and Europe. The University of New Hampshire became the first US state university to accept the gaokao in its entrance criteria last year. The test is also recognized by 30 universities in Australia and 30 in Canada, as well as colleges in Italy, France and Spain.

［写作内容］

1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

2.谈谈剑桥大学接受中国高考成绩对你的启示，用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

［写作要求］

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3.不必写标题。

［评分标准］

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】The University of Cambridge announced that it had been accepting China's gaokao scores when admitting students for several years. Actually, more and more universities in Western countries have begun to accept the gaokao.

From where I stand, the gaokao's gaining more international acceptance conveys the messages that China is becoming much stronger and more influential on the world stage. First of all, China has created numerous economic miracles since its reform and opening up. It's known to all that China is the world's second largest economy and its GDP has been increasing rapidly in the past 40 years. Secondly, China has made great achievements in science and technology. Let's take " four new great inventions " for example. High-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping have completely changed the world. Last but not the least, China's soft power has been improved. As a country with a history of 5000 years, China has been spreading its culture throughout the world. More and more foreign countries begin to show interest in, and respect for China.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于读后任务类作文，要求考生根据题干所给文章，按照写作要求写出写作内容。

第一步：审题

类别：读后任务

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和现在完成时为主。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.概述上述信息的主要内容；

2. 剑桥大学接受中国高考成绩的启示，以及理由。

第二步:列提纲 （行文脉络）

第一段，通过阅读所给文章，可以总结出主要内容：剑桥大学宣布，它在录取学生时已经接受中国的高考分数很多年了。事实上，越来越多的西方国家的大学已经开始接受高考。

第二段为启示部分，要从个人角度来看，根据题目要求，需要写出2-3个理由或论据支撑个人看法。启示为：高考获得更多的国际认可，传达出中国在世界舞台上变得更强大、更有影响力的信息。理由如下：首先，改革开放以来，中国创造了无数的经济奇迹。众所周知，中国是世界第二大经济体，在过去的40年里，中国的GDP一直在快速增长。第二，中国在科学技术方面取得了巨大成就。让我们以“四大发明”为例。高速铁路、电子支付、共享单车和网上购物彻底改变了世界。最后，中国的软实力得到了提升。作为一个有五千年历史的国家，中国一直在向世界传播自己的文化。越来越多的国家开始对中国表现出兴趣和尊重。

列提纲 （重点词组）

Admit; on the world stage; First of all; It's known to all; GDP; Secondly; make achievements; for example; Last but not the least; soft power; show interest in; show respect for.

第三步：连词成句

1. From where I stand, the gaokao's gaining more international acceptance conveys the messages that China is becoming much stronger and more influential on the world stage.

2. China has created numerous economic miracles since its reform and opening up.

3. It's known to all that China is the world's second largest economy and its GDP has been increasing rapidly in the past 40 years.

4. China has made great achievements in science and technology..

5. High-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping have completely changed the world.

6. China's soft power has been improved.

7. More and more foreign countries begin to show interest in, and respect for China.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改