Question

4．假定你是李华，你的英国网友Anna在她学校举办的一次作文比赛中荣获一等奖，你写信向她表示祝贺，并在信中谈及自己在英语写作上存在的困难，希望得到她的帮助．
注意：
1．词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不能出现真实姓名和具体学校信息．
Dear Anna，
I am very glad to learn thatyou have won the first prize in your school's English writing contest．And I am writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your excellent performance．
It's a real encouragement to me to see your efforts rewarded．How I admire your writing skills!I have been learning English for several years and I have little trouble in listening，speaking and writing．However，I find it hard to write a good composition．Although I've put a lot of efforts into it，I just can't find a way out．I feel stressed out．I would appreciate it if you could give me some specific advice on it．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
How I admire your writing skills!I have been learning English for several years and I have little trouble in listening，speaking and writing
我多么羡慕你的写作技巧！我已经学了几年的英语，我有点小麻烦在听力、口语和写作．
高分句型二：
Although I've put a lot of efforts into it，I just can't find a way out．I feel stressed out．I would appreciate it if you could give me some specific advice on it．
虽然我已经做了很大的努力，我就是找不到出路．我觉得压力太大．我想如果你能给我关于它的一些具体建议，不胜感激．

解答 Dear Anna，
I am very glad to learn that you have won the first prize in your school's English writing contest．And I am writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your excellent performance．
It's a real encouragement to me to see your efforts rewarded．How I admire your writing skills!I have been learning English for several years and I have little trouble in listening，speaking and writing（高分句型一）．However，I find it hard to write a good composition．Although I've put a lot of efforts into it，I just can't find a way out．I feel stressed out．I would appreciate it if you could give me some specific advice on it（高分句型二）．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．