Question

【题目】作为一名高三学生，请你就目前普遍存在的中学生暑期游览名牌大学的现象用英语给校报“英语角”写一篇短文。

1．名校游的积极作用（至少两点）；

2．名校游的负面作用（至少两点）；

3．你的看法。

注意：

1．短文须包括所有要点，可适度发挥，使行文连贯。

2．词数120左右，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。

3．不得提及本人姓名和所在学校。

Visiting famous universities during summer holidays is gaining popularity among high school students．

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Answer 1

【答案】A possible version:Visiting famous universities during summer holidays is gaining popularity among high school students. In recent years，many high schools have been organizing visits to famous universities during summer holidays.Obviously，it is beneficial for us high school students. Firstly，by visiting those famous universities we can get to know more about them and can experience the academic atmosphere there. Secondly，these visits can inspire us to set higher goals and arouse our enthusiasm to work hard at our lessons.However，the visits can have negative impacts on parts of the universities. Too many visitors on the campus can disturb the normal school life there，which is a great pressure for the universities concerned. Furthermore，it may cause safety problems as well.In my opinion，visiting universities during the holidays is a good idea，but we must make sure it does not become a burden for the universities.

【解析】这是一篇夹叙夹议的表达自己观点的议论文。首先描述题目要求的现象，其次讲诉这种现象带来的影响作用——积极的、消极的，最后阐述一下自己的观点和立场；注意在阐述自己的立场和观点时要明确，不能模棱两可，让人摸不到头脑。试题分析：首先用简单的语言阐述现象：Visiting famous universities during summer holidays is gaining popularity among high school students. In recent years，many high schools have been organizing visits to famous universities during summer holidays. 其中使用现在进行时和现在完成进行时表达出一种最近的和将要持续下去的状态，切合题意，短语：gain popularity among… 在……流行起来；In recent years 近来等增加文章档次。然后指出现象带来的影响：Obviously，it is beneficial for us high school students. Firstly，by visiting those famous universities we can get to know more about them and can experience the academic atmosphere there. Secondly，these visits can inspire us to set higher goals and arouse our enthusiasm to work hard at our lessons.其中运用firstly，secondly等词，使文章更有条理性。短语：be beneficial for… 对……有益，使文章更简洁有力；However，the visits can have negative impacts on parts of the universities. Too many visitors on the campus can disturb the normal /span>school life there，which is a great pressure for the universities concerned. Furthermore，it may cause safety problems as well。However，承上启下，很自然地引出下文的消极作用，使文章结构清晰；短语：have negative impacts on… 对……有消极影响。最后用 In my opinion来表达自己的观点。