Question

【题目】阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Every child has his own dream. Every child hopes to be an adult. All of them think it is a good thing to grow up, However, is it truly like what they imagine? As a boy who lives in modern times, I still clearly remember the happiness of my childhood. What a good time we had! We didn’t need to study all the time and our task was to play. We had no worries. Unluckily, we had to face the reality following time’s passing. We began to gradually feel this invisible pressure coming upon us. We had less spare time for playing and had to give more of our time for homework. Our stress was coming! We get up before sunrise and return after sunset. We work and study like an adult, even harder. What we do is in order to get an excellent mark. Oh, growing up is extremely boring. Perhaps each child will have or has had the stress of growing up; the most important thing for us to solve our worries. We must try to find happiness while growing up so that we can get a balance.

[写作内容]

1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点；

2. 然后以约120个词就“成长是快乐的还是烦恼的” 这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下内容要点，该部分词数约120词。

1). 简述你在成长过程中的快乐或烦恼；

2). 你对成长的快乐或烦恼的看法。

[写作要求]

1). 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

2). 标题自定

Answer 1

【答案】

The writer of the passage tells us that we had enough time to play in our childhood. While we are growing up, worries come upon us and our spare time is less but homework more. So we felt growing up boring.

As far as I am concerned, growing up is really boring. As a teenager, I have to deal with a lot of worries while growing up. I have to go to school very early in the morning and get home very late in the evening. And I have to take all kinds of exams every year. I am also worried about being misunderstood by friends and losing them. Although we face worries, we should seek support from our friends, parents and teacher to solve them and try to find pleasure in growing up. In fact, the path of adolescence is full of sunshine. Why not enjoy the pleasure of growing up and its delicious taste?

【解析】

试题分析：本书面表达是一篇读写任务写作。本书面表达的要求考生首先用30个单词概括所给的文字，然后再给出自己的评判。不管考生是赞成还是反对哪一观点，都要提供足够的理由或者论据。首先，概括部分考查了学生的概括能力，学生再概括的时候要注意语言的精炼性，要点要齐全。其次，阐述的理由或论据要简洁明了，层次分明。最后，对自己的观点要作出总结。

【亮点说明】范文用了一些词组：如grow up, come upon, As far as sb. be concerned, deal with, in fact, be full of]等等。句型上也是多变：As far as I am concerned, growing up is really boring.这句话用了动名词作主语，As a teenager, I have to deal with a lot of worries while growing up.这句话运用了现在分词作状语等等。