Question

3．假如你叫王军，是一名刚刚经历过高考的大一学生．请结合自己的经历给高三的学生们提一些缓解学习压力的建议．
要求：1）建议至少要3条：
2）字数：120词左右；
3）开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear friends，
I used to be under great pressure when I was in Senior Three，eager to be admitted by an ideal university but at the same time anxious about my final score．
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Yours sincerely，
Wang Jun．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
重点词汇：
Firstly首先；  Secondly其次； Thirdly第三；
高分句型一：
Luckily，I finally managed to get through and realized my dream
幸运的是，我终于成功地实现了我的梦想．
高分句型二：
If you have some difficulties or feel worried，talk with your family members or friends．
如果你有一些困难或感到焦虑，与你的家人或朋友交谈．

解答 Dear friends，
     I used to be under great pressure when I was in Senior Three，eager to be admitted by an ideal university but at the same time anxious about my final scores． Luckily，I finally managed to get through and realized my dream．（高分句型一）
     To help you lessen your anxiety，I have some suggestions for you to follow．Firstly，don't aim too high．Make a practical study plan and focus on the basic knowledge in your learning．Secondly，make good use of your time．Stay concentrated when you are doing your lessons．After class，do some physical exercise and make sure that you have enough sleep．Thirdly，learn to reduce your pressure．If you have some difficulties or feel worried，talk with your family members or friends（高分句型二）．Of course，you can also find some other ways to relax yourselves．
     Sincerely hope that my suggestions could be helpful and wish you good luck in the coming College Entrance Exam．
Yours sincerely，
Wang Jun 

点评 本书面表达为议论文，议论文是对某现象或观点进行点评．写作时，应注意按提出、分析、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排文章结构，使用足够的论据来分层次论证自己的观点．