Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

There are advantage for students to work while studying at school. One of them was that they can earn money. In the most part，students working to earn money for their own use. Earning their own money allow them to spend on anything as if they please. They would have to ask their parents for money or for permission to do things by the money. Some students may also to save up for our college or future use.

 

Answer 1

1.第一行advantage变复数；

2.第二行was改为is

3.第三行working改为work

4.第四行allow改为allows

5.第五行by改为with

6.第六行去掉to情态动词后直接跟动词原形；our改为their。

【解析】

1.第一行advantage变复数，因为前面是are；

2.第二行was改为is因为本文用的是一般现在时；In改为For，固定搭配“对于大多数学生来说”

3.第三行working改为work，谓语动词

4.第四行allow改为allows，动名词短语做主语谓语动词用单数；去掉if，根据句意；would后加not根据句意“他们不再向父母要钱”

5.第五行by改为with，根据句意

6.第六行去掉to情态动词后直接跟动词原形；our改为their，人称用错。