Question

假如你是李华，针对你市目前的交通拥堵问题，给市长写一封信，提出自己的建议。要点如下：
1. 私家车增多和司机违规行驶造成交通堵塞；
2. 提出解决的办法，包括：1）政府鼓励人们使用公共交通并限制私家车；
2）修建更多的车道与停车场；
3）教育大众遵守交通规则；
3. 希望市长予以回复。
注意：1. 词数100—120；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇： lane n. 车道;  private car 私家车;  parking lot停车场
traffic jam交通堵塞;   public transport公共交通
Dear Mayor,
I’m writing to give some suggestions to improve our city’s transportation.
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mayor,
I’m writing to give some suggestions to improve our city’s transportation.
At present, traffic jams have become a major problem in our city every day. The number of private cars has been increasing all the time. What’s more, some drivers disobey traffic rules, thus constantly causing traffic jams.
From my point of view, measures must be taken to solve this problem. First of all, the government should encourage people to use public transport more and at same time limit private cars. What comes next is that more lanes and parking lots should be built. Last but not least, it’s important to educate the public to obey traffic rules.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

试题分析：这是一篇建议信，文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，难度不大，在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。
点评：建议信作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。提出建议要切实可行，要符合英语习惯，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。