Question

9．下面是China Daily上有关大城市是否应该限制小汽车数量报道中的两种截然不同的观点．请仔细阅读这两段文字，然后用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的个人看法．
注意：
1．观点要鲜明，论点、论据充分；
2．可适当发挥，使行文连贯、通顺；
3．词数：不少于100．
观点一：More cars mean more pollution and more accidents．Car limitation can avoid building more roads and people living in big cities can be provided with more houses and parks．In this way，people can improve their lives．So it's necessary to limit the number of cars in big cities．
观点二：More cars mean more jobs and more convenience for people living in big cities．Meanwhile more cars can improve the industry of cars and of course speed up the city's development．So it's unnecessary to limit cars in big cities．
Different people have different ideas about car limitation in big cities．      ．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文话题提出了大城市是否应该限制小汽车数量的问题，给出了两种观点．支持者认为限制汽车数量可以改善人们居住环境，反对者认为汽车行业可以促进人们就业．考生写作时要注意两个观点都要兼顾，最后提出自己的观点．写作时尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
重要短语：
 traffic jams 交通堵塞，as our individuals，就我们个人来说，take some measures to do，采取措施做，
高分句子：
1．With the fast development of human society and the improvement of life standard，private car has become more and more common in our country，especially in cities．With加短语做伴随状语，是文章常用的开头句式．
2．Eventually，it is good for us to save more time to improve the efficiency of life．本句中含有重要句型it is good for us to do…，我们应当做…

解答 With the fast development of human society and the improvement of life standard，private car has become more and more common in our country，especially in cities．（高分句型）It brings some benefit for us but also causes many problems at the same time．（提出话题）
     For one thing，private car has increasingly played a significant role in our daily life．To start with，private cars provide more convenience as a kind of vehicle．Furthermore，with the increase of private cars，the automobile companies can offer more and more job opportunities and reduce the pressure of unemployment．Eventually，it is good for us to save more time to improve the efficiency of life．（高分句型） For example，we do not have to wait for a bus when we are in a hurry．（支持观点）
     However，for another，private car has caused many problems as well．Firstly，the environment would be heavily polluted if the number of private cars rises too quickly．The exhaust gas from cars pollutes the air and causes some serious problems to human health．Moreover，too many private cars will cause traffic jams instead of bringing convenience．Finally，the increase of traffic accidents has threatened the safety of people's life．（反对观点）
     As far as I am concerned，as our individuals，we should prefer to choose the public transportations when we go out．And for our government，they should take some measures to limit the increasing number of private cars．（提出自己看法）

点评 要想使自己的书面表达得高分，首先要做到发挥自身的优势，使用熟练掌握的句型，避开自己的弱点，尽量做到不犯错误或少犯错误．考生平时可以多累积高分词汇和句型．