Question

【题目】假设你是李华，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教(tutor) 的广告，欢迎中国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件中请参加。

内容主要包括：

自我介绍（包括中英文能力)：

参加意图（帮助别人学习中文和推介中国文化）：

希望获准。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总次数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a senior middle school student from China. I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language.

I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from China and I'd like to get this job. For me, Chinese is my native tongue and Tm excellent at it. Besides, I've been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English. I’m willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well.

I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours. Looking forward to your reply!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封电子邮件。从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教(tutor) 的广告，请写一封电子邮件参加，内容主要包括：自我介绍（包括中英文能力)；参加意图（帮助别人学习中文和推介中国文化）；希望获准。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封电子邮件，格式正确，内容齐全，语句流畅，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language.在句中that引导定语从句，现在分词做伴随状语；I've been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English.现在完成进行时态使用巧妙；I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours.句中使用省略that的宾语从句；另外，For me, Besides, as well等的运用为文章增色添彩。