Question

5．假设你是李华．期末将至，你的美国朋友Danny来信希望了解你的暑假安排．请根据以下提示用英语为其写一封回信，并简述理由．
1．帮父母做家务；2．锻炼身体；3．参加社会活动；4．加强课外阅读；5．完成暑假作业．
要求：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear Danny，
I am very glad to hear from you．Now，I'd like to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation．         ．
Wish you a happy holiday．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息针对暑假安排，写一封回信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：帮父母做家务；锻炼身体；参加社会活动；加强课外阅读；完成暑假作业． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：First and foremost，it's of vital importance to help our parents do chorces and chat with them．句中it作形式主语；恰当的过渡词，如 By the way顺便说一下；First and foremost，首先；Besides另外；Additionally另外；Last but not least最后且最重要．

解答 Dear Danny，
      I am very glad to hear from you．Now，I'd like to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation．With the summer holiday approaching，I have had a plan about how to spend my holiday and how to make a meaningful vacation．
      By the way，I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation．（主题句） First and foremost，it's of vital importance to help our parents do chorces and chat with them．（拓展句1）Besides，I would do a part time job，so that my interpersonal skills would be improved．（拓展句2）Additionally，joining in some socia activities is indispensible．Maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant（拓展句3）Last but not least，it is necessary for me to read some books  and finish my homework．（拓展句4）
　　These are my plan for the summer vacation．What's yours？I am looking forward to your earliest reply．（以合理的客套话结尾）
       Wish you a happy holiday．
                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                       Li Hua．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．