Question

19．你是石柱中学学生李华，你校将于5月28-31日接待来访的美国中学生乐团．请你根据下面表格中的内容，代表石柱中学用英语给对方团长Ms．Black写一封电子邮件，告知活动的大致安排．

时间	活动安排
5月28日	接机，入住人民宾馆
5月29日	上午：校长致辞，参观校园、校史展览馆，交流 下午：参观石柱博物馆 晚上：观看演出
5月30日	白天：游览黄水景区 晚上：品尝风味小吃
5月31日	送机

注意：
1．词数100左右（开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：风味小吃 local flavor snacks  校史展览馆the School Exhibition Hall
Dear Ms．Jones，
We're very glad to hear that the members of your orchestra will visit our school．
                                                           
Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息你校将于5月28-31日接待来访的美国中学生乐团．请你根据下面表格中的内容，代表石柱中学用英语给对方团长Ms．Black写一封电子邮件，告知活动的大致安排，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点：分别从时间和活动安排来介绍 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照时间顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：On behalf of代表；in general总的来说；pick  up去接；make a speech做演讲；Besides另外；pay a visit to 参观，拜访；see  off 送行；have a good time 过得愉快；
On behalf of our school，I'll tell you the schedule of activities in general．（高分句型一）   
Besides，you are welcome to the School Exhibition which gives a bird view of the development of our school．（高分句型二）
In the afternoon，you're to visit Shizhu Museum，where you'll learn about the history of Shizhu．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Ms．Jones，
       We're very glad to hear that the members of your orchestra will visit our school．On behalf of our school，I'll tell you the schedule of activities in general．（高分句型一）   
       We'll pick you up at the airport on May 28^th and take you to stay at Renmin Hotel．On the morning of May 29^th，our headmaster will make a speech and then we'll show you around our schoolyard as we communicate．Besides，you are welcome to the School Exhibition which gives a bird view of the development of our school．（高分句型二）In the afternoon，you're to visit Shizhu Museum，where you'll learn about the history of Shizhu．（高分句型三）In the evening，you'll watch a performance given by both your members and our students．On May 30^th，you'll pay a visit to Huangshui scenic spots in the daytime and in the evening，you'll have a chance to taste local flavor snacks in Shizhu．On May 31^st，we'll see you off at the airport．
       We sincerely hope that you'll have a good time here!
       Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．